Post by kiba on Nov 21, 2014 14:37:18 GMT -6
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Name: Coloredkit --> Coloredpaw --> Coloredvision
Gender: Male
Age: 29 Moons
Alliance: RiverClan
Rank: Warrior
Looks: This tom is a large, yet lithe son of a gun. His tail snakes out behind him, which is great when he is swimming, to help control his direction, and his paws are large with slight webbing which makes it a lot easier for him to swim swifter without putting to much power into his strokes. Large ears sit on his head, while his eyes are two separate colors, blue and green. Coloredvision's fur is star white, which makes it almost impossible for him to be seen during winter, and helps put him ontop when it comes to hunting. Muscles ripple with every step he takes, so a fight with this big boy may end with quite a few painful wounds to remember him by.
Personality: On the occasion you can get Coloredvision to talk he is very blundt and isnt afraid to hurt your feelings, but for the most part he is silent and prefers to play mute after the death of his mate. That doesnt mean he cant be commanding, put him in charge and everything will run smoothly without the smallest of a complaint. He has a soft spot for his daughter, and is secretly affectionate, perhaps one day he will fall in love again. Dont feel afraid to ask him a question or two, he will more than likely answer it, perhaps in a short clipped tone, but he wont leave you hanging.
Likes.
1. Sitting by the river, playing memories of himself and Rosefur through his mind.He swears that sometimes he can feel her brush against him, and her sweet smell swirling around his body, as if a reminder that she is waiting for him.
2. Strangely enough he loves to attend gatherings, but only to see his daughter and ask how she is doing.
Dislikes.
1. Foxes. If a fox comes near him, his first reaction will be to kill it.
2. Others cats kits. They annoy him
3. Sunlight, he would rather it be cloudy.
Special Skills: His webbed feet give him an extra OOMF when in the water. Thats pretty rad.
Powers: None
History.
Coloredkit was born to young Cherryblossom and led an easy life. He became an apprentice at 6 moons old, showed fine improvement and ended up earning his warrior name at 11 moons, a moon younger than normal, yet his body size was big enough to make up for it. At 20 moons he met a young she-cat by the name of Rosepaw at the river, this was the first time Coloredvision had fallen in love. Rosepaw was a pretty little lynx point, whom he began to watch frequently from the grassy area in his territory. Most of the time she was with the medicine cat, asking questions, laughing, and being absolutely beautiful. One day he gained the courage to show himself, and to his surprise, had found out she visited the river to watch him as well. It was love.. yet what was he doing? She was 9 moons to his 20, but that did not stop their meetings, did not stop the moonlit naps, his tongue brushing her ears softly, tail curling around her body protectively. They were happy.
That is, until he noticed her gaining weight, her paw steps beginning to make deeper prints into the muddy parts of the rivers edge. Fear gripped him, and when he asked her she told him softly.. oh so softly.. that she was pregnant with his kits. Her? Pregnant? At this age? He didnt know what to do, but he didnt refuse to see her, but instead began to bring her prey on their nightly meetings, until a couple of months later, she didnt show.
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Coloredvision flared his nose as he sniffed up and down the ThunderClan border, his eyes widened in alarm. Rosepaws sent was faint, it was from a few days before. She had promised to meet him tonight, as it had been getting harder for her to walk such a far distance. That night she had told him that the clan knew what was happening, and she was being coddled like a kit. Her leader was not happy, but she swore she had not given the name of the cat who had mated her. But now he was tempted to run to their camp, figure out what had happened. Taking a deep breath the tom sat and waited.. and waited.. yet she did not appear. Fear pierced through him and in an overwhelming feeling to be with his mate, the warrior crossed the border and raised towards ThunderClans camp, his paw steps making crackling noise as his he flew across fallen leaves and yellowing grass. Leaf-Bare was almost upon them.
A shout from behind caused his ears to flicker back, before he heard more paw steps behind him, growling as the sound of Thunderclanners got closer. "Damn it." he hissed. Before he turned swiftly, staring down his pursuer. Instantly he was circled, and in front of him stood his neighbors, all of which looked angry. "What the hell is a Riverclanner doing on our territory!" a younger warrior snarled, before taking a step forward. "How dare you enter without permission!"
"Oh shut up" Coloredvision growled. "Take me to your camp." he demanded. A ripple of uneasiness filled the void, before an older warrior narrowed her blue eyes, teeth bared. "Dont tell us what to do, we dont have to do anything. In fact we should escort you back to your camp." She said in a steely tone. "What business do you have demanding something of us, when you have tresspassed on our land."
The tom felt himself get defensive before the thought of Rosepaw, smiling her beautiful smile, flickered through his mind. A moment later he deflated, his head bowing to them. "Please.." he whispered. "Please take me to see Rosepaw."
Gasps filled the air before the she-cat with the blue eyes pushed him to the ground, her claws digging into his neck. "It was you." She snarled. "You are the reason why my daughter is pregnant." Daughter? this... this must have been Snowbird. Rosepaws mother... out of all the cats he could have run in to. Tilting his head back he gazed up at the stars. "Yes..." he whispered. "It was an accident, it was never my intention to give her kits so young... i love her so much."
Her claws dug deeper into his neck, and he could feel blood beginning to drip down, staining his white fur red. "Snowbird!" the tom behind them gasped. "Snowbird stop!"
"Why should I?" Snowbird snarled, hatred in her eyes as she glared down at Coloredvision. "He raped my daughter!"
Raped... Raped... Raped...
"I would.." He choked. "Never do something... against her will.."
"Are you calling her a whore??" Snowbird Screeched, before lifting her paw up, her sharp claws glinting in the moonlight before she sliced them downward, her destination his neck. He closed his eyes, awaiting the hit, yet it never came. The other tom had taken action, and leaped forward to tackle the queen to the ground, his paws holding her down. "Get off me Owlflight!" She snarled, but instead, the tom named Owlflight leaned down, whispering hurriedly in her ear before she stopped moving. The females blue eyes turned to stare at Coloredvision before a wicked smile appeared on her face. "Fine." She meowed sickeningly sweet. "We will take you to camp. Follow me"
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The group walked him into camp, him in the middle as a prisoner. A silver she-cat ran to meet Snowbird almost immediately, and with a surprised noise she broke away from the group, and raced toward a den across the way. Coloredvision watched her in confusion, before he noticed many cats surrounding the den, their heads bowed. The scene was strange, until an ear splitting cry filled the air, and the sound send his fur on edge. Rosepaw. It was Rosepaw. The cry... it was his girl. Without waiting he rushed forward, startling the Thunderclan cats around the den before forcing his way into what must have been the nursery. Angry voices rose behind him, but he ignored it as the story unfolded before him. Snowbird was at Rosepaws head, giving her strong licks on the neck as another cat stood at her tail, blood staining her lower half as the tom-cat whispered encouragingly to Rosepaw. "One more push" He meowed. "Please dont give up yet Rosepaw." fear.. so much fear in his tone.
She looked so small, so weak, and her eyes stared deadly forward, unfocused... A ripple passed through her body and another scream left her throat, claws extended out of pain. Coloredvision stood there in horror, before a tiny whimper left his throat. Rosepaw... Rosepaw.. "Rosepaw.." He whispered. At the sound of his voice her eyes fluttered with recognition, before she focused them onto his face... and there it was.. Happiness. She was so happy to see him. Her mouth tried to form a word that did not leave her mouth... Taking a step forward he pushed his body to the ground, touching his nose to hers, anger flaring through him. "I am so sorry." he whispered. "Im sorry Rosepaw... this is my fault... I am so sorry..." Another ripple pushed itself through her body, but this time she didnt even cry out, her eyes just stayed locked on him before the tom-cat near her tail whispered a soft congratulations. Coloredvision turned his eyes to stare at the pure white kit that the, who he soon found out, medicine cat sat near himself, licking her clean. "Its a she-kit."
A girl..?
He had a daughter..?
Love flared inside his chest, before his eyes passed back to Rosepaw. Her eyes were now closed, and in a panic, he leaped to his paws. "Rosepaw?! Rosepaw!!" He cried, pushing his head against her neck, over and over, before a snarl from Snowbird stopped him in his tracks. "Step back Riverclanner!" she sneered, her teeth bared in a deadly poise. She was ready to rip his throat out if she felt the need to. Sitting himself down, shaking, he watched for a sign, any sign... and there it was.. a soft rise and fall of her chest. "S-she lives?" he whispered. "Oh dear StarClan she lives." Coloredvision cried, before once again sinking to the ground, burying his face to his paws while a sob passed through him. That night... had been a close one.
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By the end of the day, everything was out in the open in not only ThunderClan but RiverClan. The Thunderclanners hated him, his family (the riverclanners) hated and were disgusted by his actions. But he did not care. After being kicked out of the Nursery in ThunderClans camp, he had been sent to the leader to tell him what had happened. After being drilled with questions, he had been released to go wait for Rosepaw to awake. The medicine cat believed she would live, but it would take a few days to recover. So here he was, waiting like a patient dog for her to awaken, warriors had been sent to tell RiverClan of their warrior, before Riverstar herself returned. If she had gone to chew him out, the moment she gazed upon his eyes, and saw the hurt, she stopped herself.
Coloredvision didnt care anyways. His concern was his mate and his kit. By nightfall the next night was when Rosepaw awakened, and smiled at the sight of her love. "Coloredvision." She whispered. "What are you doing here."
"Its a long story.." He whispered back, making his way into the nursery. "I love you so much Rosepaw." Coloredvision meowed, touching his nose to hers. "You did so well.. We have a daughter.." the thought struck her as funny, cause a moment later she was laughing softly, her tail curled around her little bundle. "I know... and I decided on a name." Rosepaw purred, before knudging her kit. "Perikit.. is her name."
Perikit...
"Its beautiful... she is beautiful..." he purred, laying his head on her neck. "You are beautiful..."
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With the permission of the ThunderClan leader Coloredvision stayed a week in ThunderCans camp before returning to his own. He was chewed out, yelled out, and ignored for the longest time. But he did not care. He was given visiting rights as long as he hunted for ThunderClan. Which he did, every time. He watched his daughter grow, and her eyes... those beautiful eyes, were the color of Periwinkle, always excited, when he stepped into the nursery. When she was 2 months old, Rosepaw and Coloredvision explained to her that she was half-clan, part RiverClan part ThunderClan. She did not care.. But what she did care about was when Riverstar said Coloredvision would not be allowed to see either Rosepaw or Perikit once she reached 3 moons. A fight broke out between him, and he even threatened to leave his clan.. but to leave the river... it was a hard decision. Rosepaw told him to stay, and after a long talk they agreed it would be for the best. So when Perikit turned 3 moons old, he gave her a final goodbye, and left ThunderClan for good.
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The news came as a shock. A huge shock. A fox had gotten into camp, and Rosefur had been the first to act. From what Coloredvision had heard, she had gone down fighting like all of LionClan to protect the elders den. The fox had grabbed her by the throat, shook her, killing her instantly. The news made him mute. He attended her burial, saying his final goodbyes, with Perikit pressed to his side, weeping over her mother. The two didnt move for hours, before he gently picked her up, and took her back to ThunderClan, before giving her a gentle lick, a soft nuzzle, and left for RiverClan. He went a couple of moons without talking to anyone, yet he got word that the newly apprenticed Peripaw was flying through her colors, her training going amazingly great. A prodigy, especially for a half-clanner. Pride filled Coloredvision when he heard of such a thing, and every night, he gives a small prayer to his mate, thanking her for the life she gave him in Peripaw.
Roleplay Sample. [This is from a past roleplay]
A magical feather?
"I dont know if I would call it magical. But rumor has it that a cat by the name of Wishingwell is always wearing a black ravens feather around his neck. Ive been told that it gives him powers to run faster and strike harder in battle." Coloredvision meowed with a short stretch. "Of course, it is only a story. Dumb apprentices, always make up rumors about the high-positions. I wander who started that one about the Shadowclan general?"
The young she-cat in front of him blinked before opening her mouth to whisper something before the tom replied.
"are you sure? Or are you looking for the feather? Last time i checked Peripaw had lost her bow." With a chuckle he sat back on his haunches and smiled. "Yuu can find the feather with a Shadowclanner by the name of Wishingwell. He is a general."
